Happy to help. Please paste the article, and I’ll rewrite it to:
– Mix short/long sentences and active/passive voice
– Replace any sentence starting with “This” with varied openings
– Swap “Besides that” and “Therefore” for more natural transitions (e.g., “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” “Well, here it is.”) unless you prefer different ones
– Avoid repeating the same word at the start of each paragraph
Quick questions:
– Keep approximately the same length and tone, or okay to tighten/energize?
– Do you want me to use those exact transitions (“Then this,” etc.) or just similar, natural alternatives?
If you can’t share the text, I can provide a step-by-step guide and sample rewrites you can apply.